From b8c3ce57106a87b3a9faac7eb4ae17e6476b85b6 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: diego <diego@b3059339-0415-0410-9bf9-f77b7e298cf2>
Date: Wed, 8 Oct 2003 02:16:50 +0000
Subject: wording improvement

git-svn-id: svn://svn.mplayerhq.hu/mplayer/trunk@11050 b3059339-0415-0410-9bf9-f77b7e298cf2
---
 DOCS/en/bugreports.html    | 4 ++--
 DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'DOCS')

diff --git a/DOCS/en/bugreports.html b/DOCS/en/bugreports.html
index 3810d13cda..044e5f7789 100644
--- a/DOCS/en/bugreports.html
+++ b/DOCS/en/bugreports.html
@@ -260,13 +260,13 @@ return you to the command line prompt where you have to enter
 
 <H4><A NAME="core">B.4.6.2 How to extract meaningful information from a core dump</A></H4>
 
-<P>Please create the following command file:</P>
+<P>Create the following command file:</P>
 
 <P><CODE>bt<BR>
   disass $pc-32 $pc+32<BR>
   info all-registers</CODE></P>
 
-<P>Then simply execute the following on your command line:</P>
+<P>Then simply execute this command:</P>
 
 <P>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<CODE>gdb mplayer --core=core -batch --command=command_file &gt; mplayer.bug</CODE></P>
 
diff --git a/DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml b/DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml
index cfa6d52a0d..59c0551841 100644
--- a/DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml
+++ b/DOCS/xml/en/bugreports.xml
@@ -292,13 +292,13 @@ info all-registers
 <sect3 id="bugreports_core">
 <title>How to extract meaningful information from a core dump</title>
 <para>
-Please create the following command file:
+Create the following command file:
 <screen>
 bt
 disass $pc-32 $pc+32
 info all-registers
 </screen>
-Then simply execute the following on your command line:
+Then simply execute this command:
 <screen>gdb mplayer --core=core -batch --command=<replaceable>command_file</replaceable> &gt; mplayer.bug</screen>
 </para>
 </sect3>
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